Comments of chapter undefined of The Uncrowned King Of Assassins

Hmm..yes the chapter is quite captive and the flow is good too...its like I'm watching a real life movie..no doubt your writing is quite good...I don't think it's need any kind of improvement...but still I suggested to used a specific tone for vocals...( just a suggestion tho...if your comfortable with said then it's fine too) Cheer up author you did a great Job..

Well it's so captive...we want more author ...

This chapter is captivating. I simply can't wait to meet the ML

this is actually good 👍

Wow First chapter is great! I'm loving how easily you are able to string this story together. It is a pretty difficult subject that you chose to work with but you make it work super clean!

This chapter is a bit scary but addictive at the same time. I wanna know what is happening in the next chapters. Who is Ramika Ray?

The chapter is very good never call it trash

My nonna is right its really good

The chapter is great in a lot of ways.

This seems good af

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