Comments of chapter undefined of Second Chance at Life [A Naruto Fic]

I like what you have done with the story so far! It’s engaging and the MC is not a brainless idiot so big +1 from it. Just don’t Forget to also focus on the MC’s mentality development ! How he becomes more human…

so far so good I could think of a few routes ->send Kushina to konoha with his plan of saving the village not successful (hiding of clan members in random villages ) total annihilation except Mc partially annihilated with remaining in either hiding with being in contact or all go separate ways you know to help in re-emergence or mostly alive. just living somewhere else while preparing for future or the Mc being a lone wolf bounty man while hiding the identity personally I prefer kushina being sent to Konoha but no TOO dark elements there and in the uzumakigakure part the village is destroyed u know the land of whirlpools and Mc surviving with a few hundred clan members (atleast a 50) for recreation of the clan and all in the far future and as loyal underlings /servents or whatever and Mcs interfering point in the plot could be either rin's death or kyuubi's attack so what do u think although I want to save even white fang , I think it would be too much of a stretch 😅 🙃 anyway that's all for now from my end.

MC ship?

In my opinion, it's better for Hiruzen to be a gray character... and that if Kushina doesn't go to Konoha, Naruto won't be born and so on:/ The pace of the story should be fast for him to reach Naruto.....(google translate) :)

this is awesome dude, begging for more chapters, and you're english is perfect

Nice!

love the book so far looking forward to see what is next.