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Overlord: Ancient one

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Ravindra_Shetty
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Dude are you going make him some kind of hidden protector and leaving momonga as guild leader and he will also come to new world then this novel will not move too far I have seen plenty overlord fic In which mc and momonga both travel to new world this does not work well you see trying to maintain a balance between them will be difficult if novel uses momonga as main plot charector then people will be dissatisfied with the mc being a follower or something if you make mc as main plot charector then people will be dissatisfied with you since you undermined momonga soo yeahh don't doo that just make mc as guild leader and only he will go to new world

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ARSENAL_101
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I donated 2 stones... Now show me the next chapter

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Daoseph
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Hmm, this fanfiction it's peretty good with excellent potential ... but low word count and waisted chapters on pre story cannon , I'm afraid that when you actually start the cannon youl'll be worn out .

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King_In_The_North_
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Author-sama, I present to you my choices for the MC's personal NPCs, Grayfia Lucifuge Unohana Retsu Erza Scarlet With Grayfia and Esdeath you could create a kind of rivalry based on their ice powers. Unohana could be some kind of oni đŸ‘č. and Erza looks like an angel to me with her Heaven's Wheel Armor.

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GodLiGHT
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DukeMaster
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JustBearWithMe
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Thanks for the chapter 👍

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lemmongrasp
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thanks for the chap now i go back to the shadows and wait again for the next chapđŸ˜¶â€đŸŒ«ïž

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Nekolover2
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Thanks for the chapter

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GhostswordKk
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i think better ancient one to be main weapon nazarik because he was still hiding his full power and as strongest player

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kiritov2
kiritov2Lv6kiritov2

Thanks for The chapter

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fetishman
fetishmanLv13fetishman

i have a suggestion. He should make items that is lore heavy like this item breaks my level cap, because items in new world change according to their lore.

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PANDA10000
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Gracias por el capĂ­tulo

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iLuBu3000
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now I have to wait till they get reincarnate

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Memes_for_dreams
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Tftc

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EvilPenguin_666
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Sommerscave
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Thanks for the chapter its cool that MC is the guild Leader especially because He would actually be good at IT with all the Cheats He has even If their still weakend right now...

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Cabelinho
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Thanks for the chapter

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Xedornox
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