Ryujinlevrai
The pacing is exceptional. Most of the time, sports novels (or fanfics) drag on and on, being very repetitive. It's good that you were unafraid of summarising a lot of matches as they eventually become, "How many different ways can you score/ Someone does something in a match" for a few hundred chapters. There were points in the story where I was confused what was going on (I think it was probably the English) but I could not stop reading. All the free time I had was spent reading until I had reached the final chapter. It really feels like the whole story was planned from beginning to end, which in most cases, makes for a compelling story. You knew the kind of story you wanted to tell and the content for each volume. I kind of wished more stories were like this and less wish fufilment and more realistic. If I had to say what I felt is missing from this story, I really want to know what the Main Character is doing after he retired. What are his children doing? What about the sports clubs he invested in? I cannot help but want to find out what happened there. Anyways, great work! If you do write another story, I will be sure to pick it up.
Thanks for your comment. I appreciate it. I had a clear vision of what I wanted when I started writing. In the beginning, I had already written the last chapter. That's why I didn't lose sight of my vision until the end, and I think it'll be the same for the book I started yesterday. Many writers focus on wish fulfillment, but that's not what I wanted. I've read so many fantasy books that I got fed up. MCs who become God think they can do anything, but the world doesn't revolve around them. That's the message I wanted, and I'm glad you got it. All the stars must be aligned to achieve great things in sports, but many people avoid that. Hector failed a lot, but to win, he had to wait. I've started another book, which will be more or less the same but without the system; all talent and based on facts. In the same vein as this book, it is a different sport and as realistic as this one. I continue to write for people like you because we need more realism and not to be lulled into sleep by things like a system that makes all work pointless and unfair. Thanks for your support!