Drkest
Its very unique story. i would love to read more of it. there are some grammatical and technical mistakes with names (Its Maegelle) but other than that everything is good . Though I hope that you dont force the plot for the story to reach cannon. Aenys might help with the delivery but he would probably be against returning to westeros under viserys. Thats what i got of him so far. And as for the MC's love interest .i think you should focus on it being reasonable to the environment in the story and the character's nature. what i mean is someone of his status wont settle for a simple betrothal based love story many fictions have been writing so far. no offense just some suggestions as i have many stories being spoiled as the author has very exciting start but due to lack of new content force the plot to match the cannon . Take time (but not much) but pls dont force it . Thanks for reading this .