Comments of chapter undefined of Indebted Lady to a Heartless Gentleman
Indebted Lady to a Heartless Gentleman
MerrySweet
Chapter comments17
At first, I got the impression of a good story, an intricately well written complex plot and eventually a beautiful love story. but, here we are over 200 smth chapters deep and we still get an immature dialog/relationship between the main characters, zero communication and an incoherent story with here and there some pompous words, overall with abrupt jumps through the chapters. It is disappointing when the authors drag the story for whatever reason. It's a fantasy world the authors are supposed to feed. Instead, some drag and stagnate. Not very cordially to the readers that pay.
Your sweet chapters leave a sweet aftertaste and your heartbreaking chapters leave me wanting for more! The beauty of this author's fantasy work is how relatable the characters are. I don't want to read rushed progress. Stay true to your original plot, and thank you for creating such a unique story š
Merry Sweet, Iām really enjoying Indebted Lady to a Heartless Gentleman! ā¤ļø Egon has experienced so much trauma in his life, it wouldnāt make sense if he was a master communicator. Iām excited to read about Adela and Egonās love for one another, but it would be terribly boring if there wasnāt all this other drama between them and around them! So, what Iām saying is, I love your novel.
I Q Egonās actions & nonactions, behavior per se - a lot. But I always felt thereās a purpose behind any & everything he does & doesnāt doā¦. I donāt like how itās hurt her, but hoping heās mature enough to expose his reasons to her. Heās surely honest enough to do so, but itās whether heās willing or capable of being vulnerable enough. Heās a complex character for sure, def interesting. Would love to dive more into his POV. Heās the most interesting to me. But I still wanna flick his forehead & tell him to behave more nicely lol