Comments of chapter undefined of The Growth of a Titan

looks like the MC will be a retard

I see that, like many many authors, you tend to put the word ’then’ everywhere, I saw then, he then...it’s a recurring mistake that I often see. 😅apart from these minor details great work. 😍

it’s good but a lot of grammar spelling, I suggest to use Google documents/Grammarly.

Almost done. Stop to long with the weak sauce

I mean.. It's a good part of the story for a bit of drama but.. Please don't overuse drama for this one... I hope there's time skip were MC Wil be a bit mature...