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Comments of chapter undefined of Eventful life of a divination elder

Cash_xo
Cash_xoLv13Cash_xo

Ya again things moving too fast let the plot sink in, man.

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Groyt
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I recommend you watching some YouTu be videos on how to increase word count(I recommend specifically Jenna Morecci as she is very funny and her writing advice is very pertinent). You could describe what the environments in the sect look like(like a single level classroom with walls built out of baked clay painted in white with beams and pillars of wood, a courtyard style abode in which he shares with other inner disciples(or not)). Also, all kids can disinherit themselves if they do the same as him I believe. It’s just that living in poverty is usually scarier than death.

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Daoist629680
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Thx

laughingWolf
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OMG OMG