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nah, the chapter was good, you are very hard on yourself brother, although I still have to put a silhouette of the mc's personality, it seems the combination of Toph, Quin shi Huang and Cesar de fate, since the guy is cheerful, charismatic and even he makes blind jokes hahaha, I just have a question was Mc in his past life blind? I think not right? Also, can you give us a hint of what power you are going to give it next time? I have an idea that I don't know if it will be good, you could make the mc haha like Netero and be grateful and start giving 1000 hits and get aura or nen whatever it's called and with that he can create an ability with his hatsu and all that, It is very useful since it only uses life force and not magic