Comments of chapter undefined of Born in Blood

it’s getting a bit repetitive… some kind of skip would be appreciated

As long there is no female(you know which type of females I am talking about ) and romance ,I will read ,that's the answer of your question author

i agree where could you possibly go after him fighting a zenith bc now the it seems like the only possibility is him getting kicked out of the tournament or losing every fight from this point on.. you could have him win but that would ruin the power system of the world to some extent.. you could have another mortal that’s able to kill a zenith(the mortal light cultivator obviously) but that would not only ruin the power system as well but it would also take away from the uniqueness of the mc

It would also helped if you maybe develop a bit of the side character a bit more and there influences on the plot to help getting more depth into the story

It’s not boring as it’s great to see how much Liam’s strength as progressd agaisnt real challenges but if I remember correctly this is the second or third tournaments in a couple 100’s of chapters so I would steer away from any tournament based plot lines for a while. Every reader of this genre knows there will be cliches tht come up but it’s the spin on the cliches that making it refreshing, I like the detail of each fighter adding a rule to the fight as it is a nice spin to a tournament arc, but with Liam killing a zenith what would be his next match up?? Make sure to not write yourself into a corner and to make the main character suffer set backs instead of things always managing to work out even in the most dire of circumstances. What makes a great story is the ups and downs the Mc or even other characters related to the story plot go through and how they build themselves back up after the set back Go at your own pace and try to set up a vague plot line you see yourself writing and work on it from there, also if want to really go into it look up the writing concept of a “hero’s journey” helped me when I was writing as a hobby. A good example and twist to a hero’s journey is what marvel did in infinity war instead of the protagonist going through the journey the directors made the main villain Thanos go through the journey which is one of the main contributors of why tht movie was such a hit ! Sorry the rambling but hoped this helped some

yea every novel has this tournament it gets boring 2 chapters in but u do u I just want to read him destroying entire city's [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter