Comments of chapter undefined of Born in Blood
Born in Blood
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I like this it well written a has grabbed my attention and this chapter was much needed as though it pains me to say this his mother was only dead weight with his weak strength and also what does he look like does he have only one eye. One tip on your writing even though I as a person suck at writing (my user tag) is that you should try to describe the characters better and any changes that happen to them and other than that I think this is a great story
Alrhough this is not uncommon for something like this to happen, the breaking of the “chain” in this chapter is way too close to Demonic Sword. The occasions are different, sure, but it’s the same “mom kills herself so her son can pursue cultivation”. Not even just that, the novel even used the same “pushed into a ravine filled with monsters and needs to survive” in chapters 45ish-60. I mean, I get it. Demonic Sword was amazing and the cultivation system there is clear and concise, but c’mon. My main thing is, I would love to see more originality in the pieces, even if there are some cliches. Author, please add more of your personal voice and flair to the story, as I know that it would contribute to it a great deal.
