Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Skill Copying System

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It seems that your writing has become better in the span of the last few chapters. My only complaint is that you're jumping from 1st person to 3rd person and vice-versa from paragraph to paragraph. That's jarring, choose one and stick with it. I recomend you to choose 3rd person over 1st person because you are fond of gleaning into inner worlds of multiple characters in the same event chain. Other than that, I'm enjoying so far. Good job, author.

thanks for the chapter and make a deal or proposal to orochimaru for kin to stay with mc.

you say TenTen sucks but is literally the fourth person to know Fuinjutsu in the village as well as being one of the best CQC and weapons master every, the only reason she seems to "suck" in every fight, is because she's teammates with Neji and Lee, as well as always put up against people like Sasuke, who either have innate bloodline abilities or those who have something close to a bloodline ability.

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Gracias por el capítulo, me gusta la forma en que estás narrando. Esperando cuando folles conscientemente a Ayame.

pobre kim en siguiente capitulo

Спасибо за главу

Thx for the chapter

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Thxs for the chap

Good chapter

Thanks for chapter