Comments of chapter undefined of Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁 Overall quite good but I feel I need to give one piece of unsolicited advice as a consumer of many types of media 🤔😉 Beware making too many 'mystery boxes' in a story as they can crush a good story under all their collected weight.A good example of this poorly done is the TV show Lost, Heroes and anything made by J J Abrams.Anywho not a problem so long as the writer has a clear idea on the start, middle and end of a story 😉

System got away without any consequences. Should have atleast been deprived of thinking and making choices and forced to act like robot for a while.

thx

waiting for u to post 5* review