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Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Poseidon

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CloudyAlliance
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That hit like bolt out of the blue, this comment is not meant to criticize and take author's passion in writing, I like your story so I hope you can flesh out what happens more clearly. A foreshadowing would've been helpful or FL viewpoint earlier than this chapter, clearly it felt like FL just suddenly fell in love with MC in single chapter. Aside from that MC just go he already knew before, although we had already been following on them closely, we haven't gotten a hint from him on the previous chapters.

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Trixtr_
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jeanne in harem

Jaber_Syed
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If you don’t take both of them in his harem I am giving you bad rivew

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Haku_Ouroboros
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Mejor decirle directamente

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Herohero
HeroheroLv3Herohero

I have a question about how Poseidon will deal with the amphitrite(his wife)?

Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Thanks for the chapter

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ItsDragonking
ItsDragonkingLv14ItsDragonking

let her join the hearm

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TheLittleGirl
TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Tank yu for the chapter.

King_Rycon
King_RyconLv1King_Rycon

Is this a harem or a single pairing ? Honestly all these harem docs are getting absurd, there is way too many of them.

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DaoistoSXxRV
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thanks for the chapter

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Jossez
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Thanks for the chapter

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Shadic21
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Thanks for the chapter.

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MAO_Miaomiao
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Thanks for the Chapter

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ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for chapter.

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

OverlordBGs
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Great chapter