its's a good start for the novel, congratulations author, can wait to see how the characters are going to develop. They are still a bit young now, but will Leo and Daphne become a romantic pair in the future
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Lots of short sentences with a lot of the same words being repeated doesnât read well. Try using compound sentences and different vocabulary instead of repeating words over and over.