WhiteNightingale
I like the story so far, will be voting for sure.
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I would recommend to stop saying Leo so much, just use he instead, just some advice from a fellow writer (not yet posted here thoughđ).
NoT trying to hate but To me a lake with a waTerfall very close to a big city would have deff been explored Especially in a world with magic
A mysterious door that nobody else does discovered beforeâŚ
If this was lord of mysteries world I would've told you to be careful of so many coincidencesđđ
mc plot Armor Start
background settings for mc is just average maybe you should do differently to make is fresh . otherwise your story will just look the same that already has in this platform
chapter is too short.
How many times more do you want to write âHeâ.
The story didn't go anywhere to get some comment.