WhiteNightingale
as a start it's fine.chapter a bit short, but it gives us a brief introduction to the condition in which the mc lives.perhaps the chapter could have been further expanded, adding a few more details, perhaps some internal monologues from the protagonist, just enough to get to know his personality a little.as the chapter is, it makes me feel like he's the protagonist of Zom 100 (a character who smiles at life, even if the situation isn't the best).but it's still too early to draw any conclusions, so I'll continue.