Nuclide
You could have made it so that jessica wanted to breakup after the incident rather than forgetting about him
Nuclide:To be fair though, you could view this as an abrupt break-up caused by outside forces. I could have made it something much, much worse. It's not like I had someone gift him a dog, kill his entire family, kick his dog and then frame him for kicking the dog.
I hate what happened to Jessica. As it has been pointed out before though, this is just how the story develops. Still, I had been thinking about dropping the story as it took a very dark turn. The only thing that makes me want to keep going is the thought of finding the time stone on his journey. I hope he takes care of Jessica and he stays by her side to find some cure for her.