Comments of chapter undefined of Apex Star

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I only read this novel because of the limited free promo. I agreed that this 1st chapter really would make majority of the reader lose interest with this novel as it kinda boring first impression. Hopefully the following chapters will become better. If not, it will be just a waste of time.

I think this chapter would be much better if it had a little more context. It's barely explained what's going on and people get excited without even understanding the context or the implications. What does awakening mean? What does the voice mean by walking through the heavens and carving your names into the realms? It makes more sense for people to feel confused and apprehensive than excited.

you really should edit the first chapters...

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nice start 👍👍👍

Thanks for the chap

Tftc!

Good Chapter 👍

I like this chapter...nice start

This chapter makes me expect a lot of fun to come. Nova sounds like me

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