Naphulae
Hey author. I have some feedback for you. You have introduced too many new characters in a short period of time. I dont remember any of their decriptions and skills other then a few. All of them blend in together. Please kill half of them of or something because its too much of a turn of as a reader. And it seems wierd to me for them celebrating after they tried to kill each other off. Why would mielyr or his servant even do a celebration in the first place when there could be potential threats in the crowd the party scene seems wierd. When there is no connection with 90% of then and why is the qahari women even amiable to meilyr again?