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Comments of chapter undefined of The Forsaken Sovereign

Darkgnomeox
DarkgnomeoxLv13Darkgnomeox

Whilst I'm still enjoying it, I think the quality of the storytelling is declining. In my opinion their are too many characters that were hastily indroduced, that we hardly know, taking up a lot of screen time, that I would have preferred to spend on mc.A lot of "names" of things and positions are being thrown around, but with little context of what they mean. Resulting in a word salad.What really hooked me in the beginning was the detailed descriptions of the horrors of the world mc was interacting with. Now the author spends a lot of time explaining what's happening, but isnt giving much visual description, thus im find it difficult to even visualise what's going on, especially with the scenery and vibe of it all.

areeb_azhar
areeb_azharLv4areeb_azhar

Helloooo hope ur well author. Next chal when

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Eclipceborn
EclipcebornLv13Eclipceborn

Thanks for the chapter!

Eclipceborn
EclipcebornLv13Eclipceborn

Is there a schedule for this story or is it currently on break?