Comments of chapter undefined of The Forsaken Sovereign

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Thanks for the bonus chapters!

Enjoying the story so far and thank you for the chapter, you’re doing great! I do have a piece of constructive criticism though, try to avoid repetition in your writing I haven’t seen it really anywhere else so far but the last 5 or 6 paragraphs of the chapter all start with “it is said” With that being said keep up the great work!

tftc