Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of Mysteries: The God Almighty

Good

cool

Hello, first of all, cool first chapter. I don't remember seeing many mistakes, anyway I use google transalte so [img=recommend]. I believe that certain passages were a bit too descriptive. There was a part where (ancient sun god) is referred to as the old sun god, depending on the context and time line it's better to be (sun god). The story seems to be for people who have already finished LOTM. anyway thanks for the chapter

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