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Comments of chapter undefined of The Beginning After The End: Legacy

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The Beginning After The End: Legacy

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Biswas_Nepali
Biswas_NepaliLv4Biswas_Nepali

thanks for the chapter but it seams like you are forcing the oc to be in this story i like the power up's you giving to the oc but the story doesn't feal natural so plz try to make the things he do natural like any reincarnations wood have done. And your story is kind of reapating the samething from the oc point of view so plz keep that in your mind and try to change the story or make oc do any thing other then reapting in his mind what he is seeing.

1yr
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R_66
R_66Lv4R_66

Thanks for the chapter but the it felt too much like copy and paste from TBATE and Cecil didn't interfered in the whole fight

1yr
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Glitch_8959
Glitch_8959Lv1Glitch_8959

Thx for the chapter.

1yr
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Ercalia
ErcaliaLv2Ercalia

thank for chapter

1yr
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M0N4RK
M0N4RKLv3M0N4RK

thnkx for the chapter and AUTHOR-SAN like people said don't force him to stay in the story. make it so that like any other reincarnated he would make his own path or story. but i know you are trying your best so again thnkx.

1yr
Lorenz_Gutierrez_8979
Lorenz_Gutierrez_8979Lv2Lorenz_Gutierrez_8979

thanks for the chapter

1yr
Lilbigboss22
Lilbigboss22Lv14Lilbigboss22

Thanks for the chapter, I'm liking the story so far, just make sure you have less scenes where Cecil does nothing.

1yr
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