Comments of chapter undefined of A Samurai in Twilight

A Samurai in Twilight

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LucifertronLv6Lucifertron

No hate but I think you have worked yourself into a corner and you are just trying to explain your way out of it. Like no issues i like the story but you have spent the past few chapters just trying to explain your decisions which really interupts the flow of the story. I think it would of been better if you had just made him ask out tanya and it didn’t work then just kinda left him there without doing anything with the other girls. Cause also with alice who I’m assuming is going to be the soulmate and future partner you don’t want to see your ”mate” as you have described it in that kind of relationship with someone else.

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Benoit_ValtinLv10Benoit_Valtin

Yes I agree with blackfox..., a recap timeskip of her time with Denali, there's more to say anyway, and at the end the departure with a little dig at Tanya, whom she and irina can come and find him whenever she wants lol

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Ulvr_LaochLv15Ulvr_Laoch

You could include a times kip chapter to summarise what would happen to the MC in between.

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JuhikoLv6Juhiko

Thanks for the chapter 😎👍

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BlackFox_MemorysLv11BlackFox_Memorys

Thanks for the chapter, is there a third option? Where did he and Alice just stay together forever? o_o

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Young_fruit_SmileyLv14Young_fruit_Smiley

thanks for the chapter 😊 . but will he still let alice wait more for his love

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RaijinGodLv11RaijinGod

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

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Sosuke_Aizen777Lv4Sosuke_Aizen777

bro author i request you to make a different girl as soulmate for paul as there are many fanfics with Alice as soulmate .

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BlackFox_MemorysLv11BlackFox_Memorys

#teamAlice

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revived_exeLv15revived_exe

thanks for the chapter. Like many others, I agree with a time skip and small recap of what went on during those years.

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OperrLv4Operr

Thanks for the chapter!

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Green_lazy1Lv3Green_lazy1

Thanks for the good work and chapter

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Glitch_8959Lv1Glitch_8959

Thx for the chapter.

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Marcus_whateverLv2Marcus_whatever

Gud

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JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

Thanks for the chapter

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Username48399Lv14Username48399

Thanks for the chapter

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