God_Of_Wolves
It's even difficult to express in words what I'm feeling, hypocrisy, a character who lived 58 in a world of violence and murder, I agree that they change, but if you stop empathizing with other people who have gone through or are going through the same thing you went through, what differentiates you from a purposeless serial killer. Now, when he needs "thrill" to get more power, he finds it, but to the people he stole his son's body, he didn't even give it. There is no better word than "hypocrisy" to describe the character, which is fine with me, forgets it with others.
Good chapter, but it lacks a bit of explanation that is solved by adding a few paragraphs, for example, how does no supernatural being feel the magical energy that the MC uses? Even if I changed places, he wouldn't know how to erase traces, unless I draig him teach and also be a detector of supernatural beings in a wide range, so that if you detect one very far away you can escape quickly, also with the car, how did it start? You can add many small drops of gasoline, etc. in duplicate.