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I already love this novel, added to my library. This is a great and interesting start.
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A great start.... But use 'sighs' instead of 'hiss'. Mother hissing out of the blue is weird.
Thank you so much hassyâ¤ď¸I'll edit it..I appreciate you always pointing out the errors or places I need to work on all the time for meâ¤ď¸..thanks I'll edit it.
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