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Comments of chapter undefined of I Only Care For Evil Duke's Child

Katniss_Everdeen12
Katniss_Everdeen12Lv14Katniss_Everdeen12

true , the story needs to be updated everyday and preferably around the same time.also, I've noticed that the plot is not sufficiently revealed as it develops and then suddenly there is an info dump.the readers are more and more in the dark and are not being let in on the means and thoughts of the characters leading up to a scene.

Noktocielo
NoktocieloLv15Noktocielo

I am just getting to this chapter but I agree with what everyone is saying with updates and possibly getting better at correcting editing mistakes. please keep writing your story is enjoyable even if it is sometimes tough to read from errors or confusion

warrior_queen
warrior_queenLv5warrior_queen

It's engaging plot but there are some mistakes in context of names and grammar. you can update daily on same time which will keep readers engaged and eager to read it. Also there are some chapters where storyline is bit stretched and in some chapters lot of information is released causing confusion sometimes. But as I said you have good plot and strong characters just be yourself and do as per your plan. Best wishes. 😊 I am always rooting for you.[img=recommend]