Comments of chapter undefined of Omnific Tesseract

author i like your novel but there a lot of things you do that may put off a lot of readers : 1) you put a lot of different elements in the novel so it will be hard to keep up with them later on for ex: traveling to astral plane , ai assistant , skills, bloodlines, etc. it is a good to have a lot of ideas but too much will confuse the readers 2) you didn't explain anything about the mc's daemon not about his skills or any of the elements you just put them right into action with his fight with wight. so you have to explain what you want to add and have it organized to not feel the story chaotic