I can only give one suggestion the names are very confusing and it is hard to remember.Can u make it something much easier and catchy name so that we can get clear picture of empires and poweres
Please do not give us another exposition chapter. While this was interesting and the world you have made leaves a lot of room for the MC to find trouble, I would prefer being introduced to the world step-by-step throughout the story not all at once in a (almost) wall of text.