Please do not give us another exposition chapter. While this was interesting and the world you have made leaves a lot of room for the MC to find trouble, I would prefer being introduced to the world step-by-step throughout the story not all at once in a (almost) wall of text.
I can only give one suggestion the names are very confusing and it is hard to remember.Can u make it something much easier and catchy name so that we can get clear picture of empires and poweres
