RavenClaw471
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author I have questions firstly is there any magic in this world
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That was so incredibly clumsy. Why even have a cloaked mystery figure just to damask them immediately?
at first i thought the curtained world is a different world altogether... dont tell me it just another side of the world that ordinary ppl cant see?
What's up with the worsening grammar? Even the way things are phrased became so awkward. It's like the author was replaced.
