athass_prkr
Very nice chapter, I don't mind you writing a chapter here and there about an important character, like Malfoy or Longbottom since they are/were a major part either of canon or in your story. Qnd we could use a little diversity Slytherin, it looks like there is only Harry and his friends, which is kinda normal since Harry is an absolute antisocial but it is nice to see other major Slytherins like Malfoy, moreso since giving him his long awaited wake up call add some depths to the story. Though it would be best to incroporate the Malfoy/Nott duo a little in your story now