Comments of chapter undefined of Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
athass_prkr
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my only recommendation is PLEASE end this arc alreadyi get it intelligence woo hoo *inappriopriate moaning* but please for the love of God end this already my guyit would look better if it FELT like a chase of one person countering other then the other countering the first in increasingly over the top displays like with light and lbut here most of the time it seems like riddle does something and then Harry is left picking up the piecesthis all would have been much more palatble if u had given ur guy a year or two more to u know get on a somewhat level playing fieldas is with so much against him all this really does is make the mc look extremely incompetent and that's not even the worst of itwith how u r portraying dairymort makes readers wonder if he is so f ing intelligent *inappropriate moaning again* why the heck didn't he already conquer the world using his witif he is so cautious shouldn't he have researched the pros and cons BEFORE making horcruxesand I know u might give excuse that it is CANONi don't care if u can change story to show riddle vastly more intelligent than portrayed in cannon u should be ready to tackle the issues that bringsin cannon diarymort was an emotional wreck who while cumning was also very emotional and arrogant which is the main reason why he underestimated Harry so much and this paid the price
I hate when people either make him way smarter than how smart he actually is like if he smart he could've tried to level up in status in the Ministry and become this loved political character while secretly undermeaning dumbledore while building a secret organization against dumbledore spread Rumours about dumbledore as we have seen how the wizards are litral sheep destroy dumbledore reputation then when the time is right and you have enough power magical and non magical sinse he knows how powerfull muggles weapons are take on dumbledore cut his arms and legs while feeding him the immortality elixir to not have another light hero and boom
U have run yourself into a corner. By increasing the cababilitys of the Horcruxes so massively. And this is the first one riddle ever made at 16 years old so the others must be even more powerful. Then the thing with his crest, beeing able to speak conveniently with ignotus just adds another layer. This is turning into an anime, wich is bad.
Eh I kinda like the cat and mouse game.I mostly liked guessing what Riddle would do in this AU of Harry Potter and how that would change that he will do then the chase itself.The fun thing was that some of my guesses were kinda right.Lockhart didnât have the diary,Riddle was moving more people around then just whoever had the diary,and Riddle was possessing a student.And not only that,but you did it in a way I didnât expect it too.So I guess I would say that you didnât do a bad job at it,itâs just kinda got stale after awhile.I had more fun playing with the idea then reading it.But all in all you made ghost Riddle far more interesting then in the books so kudos to you.
