Comments of chapter undefined of Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

I loved this chapter, I love when author make the world of Harry Potter more indepth, make the characters better and be stronger and or smarter than canon counterparts, it makes the story shine so much. Hopefully we get more indepth study of different magics around the world and we get to see other countries and characters from other countries! Also I highly suggest checking out 'What is a Game?' by Rotsu on FF.net for more ideas of wizards being more powerful or an even more open diverse world of Harry Potter!

The first time I see a plot like this

If there are the two champions and the light has been in control of the war for some years now in the story then a great darkness will appear like how it progresses in the canon story in a way that timeline starting year 1 of Hogwarts is the great darkness because half the wizarding world was slaughtered and it makes sense why because for all those years of peace a price must be paid in order to hold balance which was withheld by Albus Dumbledore and yes I do believe there is a third faction the grey which holds the balance ⚖️ but I don't think this champion is chosen by magic rather it's chosen by the people themselves or rather there is no champion but a collective that is the champion together because no 1 man should hold such power over his fellow man

well that was awesome chapter .

Thank you for the chapter!

It was a good run while it lasted i guess. I know whats gonna happen mc will be forced to voldy tool for the sake of story and drama but i've never been a fan of work where mc is coerced into doing things he dont want by someone stronger. see y'll on the next hp fiction however long it may be ✌️

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Thanks for the chapter!

great chapter eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Ty

good idea, looking forward to seeing the follow through and hoping for the best. voldy is definitely not all there. I hope the mc looks into his back story he's seemed uninterested in it so far.

Good chapter interesting concept. I guess this chapter also lays out the plan for him, eventually joining up with Hermione which is a shame. If it's powerful enough, he doesn't need to join any faction.

Essa parada de campeão da luz e das trevas parece pura besteira. Espero que o autor não leve isso a sério e seja apenas um delírio do Voldermort, por que se for realmente um fato importante da trama e esses campeãs estejam destinados a aparecer recorrentemente, a qualidade dessa história cairia muito.

Wrong in the head...

This is Bull, right in the castle. This is too forced.