hello author, please explain how mc couldnt realize that she was a traitor ?
he should have felt something amiss within her intentions since he always talked to her. strange, really strange. at least if not explained this is a hole inside the story. thx for your hard work. amazing novel.
please give me more reaction and emotion to the story Author please like what he feel when he kill his friend the girl or why he go to the mountain to aid his master and friend like your story is good but it lack emotion and reaction for the protagonist and also details
