PenDora56
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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I love the first chapter. it is both intriguing and exciting. ❤️[img=recommend][img=recommend]
So good
How cruel! I hope he pays for this
nice chapter, really set the pace for what to come. kudos author. what's the secret though? or are we gonna find out later? can't wait.
My thoughts about this chapter 1, its pacing is fast, overall it is likeable and good read. But I hope in future it will stays consistent. That's my comment for this one.
