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Comments of chapter undefined of Spear Master

Spear Master

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RainbowBeheader
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so far its pretty good grammar needs some polish and their conversation is little weird, but other than this? interesting story

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A Oki thank you for that Tipp I will try it thank you 🙏

RainbowBeheader:did u try to have similar conversation with your friends/family? it might help do you know about The Lord Of The Mysteries? author wrote it with his wife and its great, u can feel that they are ppl and not just characters in a book
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