Silver_smile
I only have one complaint although I love your narration and detail but it's annoying when you suddenly jump from Derek perspective to 6-8 chs to Angel's perspective when we don't even know if that girl will play any role in his life(I mean it would have been fine if she was a lover but otherwise such detail is annoying) Then secondly although I love details but seriously you don't need to explain his torture period for so long. Can you please skip over to when he is released ? Afterall not everyone loves to see let alone minor but such long torture. I don't know how to say this even though I have loved story's mecha details, visualisation and fights but emotions could have been better like Angel's childish outburst even though she knew mc lost his family, she acted as if he wronged him when it was actually reverse.You know I really really wish to read this novel but if you love to put such long desperation and torture scenes and then suddenly switch it over without finishing it then this is definitely not a novel for me