Grand_Void_Daoist
Sorry, but 80% of this chapter was just the same text, over and over again. You literally selling some chapters with the same paragraphs over and over again. Not cool man :) And also just overall bad chapter quality. What exactly happened in the last 2 chapters? Instead of describing it in a good way, you just repeatedly copies the same paragraphs so many times, its even slightly hilarious :) Please dont continue doing that. The last 2 chapters were the first chapters I would easily give a 1* star rating. Because on WN you pay for chapters, and nothing happened in there, + it was just copy paste paragraphs 80-90% of the time. Criticism where critcicism is deserves ^^