OneArmedImmortal
Master Author, please advance the story, I'm anxious, if you want to build a character, try doing it with events in the story and not talking to Zhao Yufei every day, playing and discussing the meaning of life as a monk, I understand, you're building the character and personality of the character but how will he progress without experiences, if you are going to write many chapters like this, instead of just him playing with the girl, make at least a third of the chapter be about him reflecting on things related to cultivating this world , this worldâs cultivation path is wrong. In the original it is shown at the end.
When Zhao Feng reincarnated outside of the Fam Universe at the end of the book, it is explained that the Fan world's original cultivation path is wrong, so here's a cool plot that I invented for you, just like Zhao Feng, you make him have to start over his cultivation again, with more advanced cultivation, at least a Demi God, then he begins to use the cultivation system that was presented in the Original book at the end.