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Comments of chapter undefined of Overpowered Cricket system

DaoistYJTmad
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Just a doubt, as per the story, isn't Nitish still only 15 years old. Him driving a car in the last chapter, a bike this chapter - isn't it a little odd. Even the track with the heroine, she is also just a teenager, right? So her having such deep emotion feels out of the place. So wouldn't it make much more sense if this love story track happens when they are a little older. Or maybe making the love story a slow burn, both because of their age as well as their careers. Just a suggestion, that's all, your story at the end of the day. I will still read the story anyway. This book has been one of my favorites. Keep up the good work Author [img=recommend]

Asta_utsugi
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Oh sorry I forgot to mention that he had a driver in car, for bike jahanvi initially hesitated because he is too young to drive a bike, I mean boys i typically drive bikes before 18 right I mean its not a well known secret so I thought it that way, Anyways thank you for the suggestion and thank you for supporting the novel and I'd be really thankful if you'd leave a review too thanks have a great day!!!!