Comments of chapter undefined of Overpowered Cricket system
Overpowered Cricket system
Asta_utsugi
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IWhoMustNotBeNameLv4IWhoMustNotBeName
You're insulting our inteligent brother. What MS Dhoni captain in one chapter then Virat Kohli then again Dhoni. Virat was appointed as the all format from 2015. Also, Rohit Dhawan were the openers not KL. He was not even playing at that time. Get this right, or else you'll lose your readers if they know about Cricket
IWhoMustNotBeNameLv4IWhoMustNotBeName
Let's leave it there but what about you mentioning Captain Kohli in one paragraph then Captain cool Dhoni ins another.
Asta_utsugi:dude if you have literally followed the novel you'd get the point but it seems like you didn'thave you Really checked the timeline ?I clearly made a parallel world themed one with his age comparatively less than his previous life