Comments of chapter undefined of Overpowered Cricket system

I think you wasted time on things that aren't important but briefly discussed things that deserved a chapter. eg. Ayesha's deception, Nitish's fall from grace and the reason for the fall. I'd suggest you to write this novel. exclude all the unnecessary description of cricket terminologies. Simply editing the novel will take it from 3 stars to 5.

He was 37 in 2022 but 14 years old in 2011🤨🤨🤔🤔 Great math bro!