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Comments of chapter undefined of Eclipse Lovegood The Rise of the dark sun

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TimEaterOfWorlds
TimEaterOfWorldsLv15TimEaterOfWorlds

Really need to make the story into paragraphs, making it one big block of text is not only grammatically wrong but makes for poor reading

overlord9000
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it's better than when I first released the chapter that's for sure lol but seriously I will be going back over it again later when more chapters are released to fully edit it and make it both phone and computer friendly thank you for reading I hope you enjoyed the story.

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Abeeba
AbeebaLv2Abeeba

not a fan of the cultivation but will see where it goes

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Laziest1
Laziest1Lv14Laziest1

is he the only one that can cultivate in hp world to get stronger? if so how do other witches and wizards get stronger?

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Red_Eclipse_2003
Red_Eclipse_2003Lv14Red_Eclipse_2003

Thanks for the chapter👍

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Placidusax
PlacidusaxLv4Placidusax

thanks for the update ✨✨😊