Comments of chapter undefined of I Will Never Leave You
I Will Never Leave You
Flaim
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Heartless_queenLv2Heartless_queen
I'm feeling very emotional đ„ș by reading this story... it's beautiful cute best friends..! I wish that Lisa meets him..in future
Lawrence_OshimLv4Lawrence_Oshim
Okay first chapter I got better at the start, let's see they are good friends and one had to travel to Canada for his mother's sake, and then what happened? I wasn't so sure anymore to be honest, I'll delete this comment once you see it and I'm willing to help you write out a good first chapter to grab your readers into this concept, if you are on discord then dm me LAWRENCE_OSHIM#4369 lets talk more on this, let me know once you see this then I'll delete it cos as an author this type of comments could get your readers to give up on the book okay. you are doing a good job
