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Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi/Sin Of Pride

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anime_god102
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how bro felt writing this chapter

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Maybonnie
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your back!!!! and incredible scene, my heart is trembling doki-doki*

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Infinite_Shadow_57
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You know author, you fanfic idea and premise were incredible. But I was still iffy tbh, however this scene alone has made your fanfic for me. I look forward to Noctis's gains from this, doing this should push him from A and S to SSS in all stats. Meaning our boi should be lvl 2 or ready to be lvl 2

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Paulo_D_Manoel
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that's what I'm talking about!! The will to change the world, the courage to face the abyss! I truly love protagonists that are not wussies that don't work to get what they want, looking at this man I remembered the scene where Zoro took all of luffy's damage and said" nothing happened." truly balls of steel.

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Gilgamos
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I can now say this made your fanfic

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Obsideon
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DaoistIN8UsX
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I_am_watching
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A masterpiece I tell you. Brilliant work Author-san, I hope your next chapter comes out faster.

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_Lazy_Bunny_
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i litteraly just cried just now. 😭😭.. I want Moaaaar!!!

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CustomFireblast
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This guy leaves then comes back with a banger wht are u Jesus.

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Ngatz
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freya After seeing this 🤣

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ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for chapter

The_Zeta
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What he wake up his Ultra insting Just like Park Hyunseok, I need one chapter again please

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Some_Guy_3
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Thanks for the chapter, look forward to the next one

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ManasCiel
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Thanks for the chapter. Just putting this out there-, so the rest of his familia left 10 minutes before he did, they ran most of the way while he slowly but steadily walked, the distance from the 10th to the surface is not small, so they had lots of time to get far ahead, so he would get out around 30min-1hr after them, they made it to the guild and within 5-10min receptionist ran off to ask the Loki familia who were on their way to the dungeon for help, so like 5-10min to get there, and somehow mc made it out of the dungeon and part way home before all the people involved in his yet to be ‘rescue mission’ converge and watch a bleeding man walk his way home slowly, not one of them making the attempt to use magic on him to stun or paralyze him, no one casts healing magic(I think it exists there), and not one of the rather high level fighters attempts to restrain him, who was beaten up and could barely react to a level 2 let alone higher levels, and that was him at a fully intact state let alone a half dead state… My point being it felt kind of inconsistent with his state and other’s power level, as well as the amount of time spent travelling… I enjoyed, but I guess I wasn’t in the mood to hype it up and was more expecting something like what happened with Bell and the Minotaur, them all finding him on the 3rd floor nolonger walking, not because he didn’t want to but because he just couldn’t, just standing in a room or intersection surrounded by magic crystals… or something like that. But ya, just take this as constructive criticism, I can sort of see where you will be taking this in the next few chapters, with others trying to get him to join their familia with or without violence and threats, now that he paraded himself to a large amount of familias. (Just telling what I imagined, so it might not be accurate…) :/

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The_Zeta
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Honore to me

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Lordmoonlight
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I wish it was the mass release I was hoping for but TFTC

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Creus_Sun
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Now, who's going to get their weights for him? those things are expensive!

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S1lv3rCr0w
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Honestly best chapter ive read in a month

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DaoistIN8UsX
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Thanks for chapter