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Comments of chapter undefined of Omniversal Trade Center

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Funny how you diss your readers using the novel, great strategy. 150k points for random world, one would think he would rethink his plan after 20, or 30. You write as if he got one person, or two, from one world and that is, no more people, the resources of that world were expanded. Our world is bigger than you try to make those world appear. He needs clients, simple, ie people that can pay (except all his current clients which he gave many things away), not just the MC of each novel or big characters. This was your choice as an author to get him to other worlds, it's fine, its actually good, who wants him to do deals with random side character no one remembers? Going to other worlds expands the story. Just wish you didn't make the mc look stupid in the process, there are other ways. anyway...

Student_Of_Culture
Student_Of_CultureAuthorStudent_Of_Culture

I understand the point you made previously. And yeah, more people from the same worlds will connect to the shop. It's just the story doesn't even have many chapters now, so I haven't got the time to introduce them yet.

Flirt48
Flirt48Lv15Flirt48

I love that authors have to say something is an AU, even though by definition, a fan fiction is an AU

Growl_16
Growl_16Lv4Growl_16

ok first if ace rank is B so whitebeard rank should be at least A and if he become young again his strength should be at least A+ come on man this is yonko

timelessman
timelessmanLv4timelessman

tnx for the chap