Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Legacy Keeper
Harry Potter: Legacy Keeper
edgy_incel
Chapter comments36
The field guide has no interest outside of the game. What the interest for him to discover more lore when he has 5 years to learn in one ? Also you have been copy pasting game dialogues, which remove most if the suspense in your story.
again, from the looks of it, and the author mentioned in in the synopsis and the aux chapter, the whole point of this fanfic is to create an MC that is similar to that of the game's counterpart, you pointing it out and complaining about it is just weird, it's like you enter a brothel, being warned that you might get stds, yet when you got the stds, you complain about it.
dadaoist:" it's literally explained in the chapter ,,," I know my whole point is that the explication is unconvincing. Coincidely it meet my other critic where the author chose to follow the game scrypt instead to make the logical choice.
out of all the herry potter fics i read this is amazing its good and its not tripping do you have a release schedule? and also another question when will we see the next chapters hope you don't start this story and never finish it or get into stories indefinitely most of the herry potter fics i read either get it wrong or too traveled
