edgy_incel
The field guide has no interest outside of the game. What the interest for him to discover more lore when he has 5 years to learn in one ? Also you have been copy pasting game dialogues, which remove most if the suspense in your story.
out of all the herry potter fics i read this is amazing its good and its not tripping do you have a release schedule? and also another question when will we see the next chapters hope you don't start this story and never finish it or get into stories indefinitely most of the herry potter fics i read either get it wrong or too traveled